i love the progression of this poem on the 1st read…intellectual gives way to anxious, excited energy in stanza 1-2 and then 3 is pure experiential emotion 4 is aggressive and then the final is a beautiful combo of human (semi)coherence
Ha yeah i tried doing something different than what i normally do, tried to give a little more in certain ways idk, i’m glad you like it!!
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